address feedback and provide revisions for research proposal bpd gaps in research and sexuality

Address feedback and provide revisions for research proposal BPD gaps in research and sexuality

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#1

Statement of the problem: Present the description of the research problem and an explanation that describes how the research problem led to the current research question.

Faculty Comments:

Presents the description of the research problem, but does not fully explain how the research problem led to the current research question (RQ), or does not present the RQ in a question format.This is extremely light and does not seem to be linked to any specific research lit.Also you say you’re doing a qual study but most of this sounds like you’re looking at this as a causal relationship which would by definition make this a quant topic.

#2

Purpose of the study: Describe what information is needed in order to advance the knowledge base.

Faculty Comments:

Describes the information needed to advance the knowledge base, but does not specifically identify the gap in the knowledge base. Need to make sure you are using the terms right and linking back to the lit as far as the research need.

#3

Significance of the study: Explain the major themes identified in the literature.

Faculty Comments:

Does not explain the major themes identified in the literature. This does not seem to be linked to any particular research