Are you in favor of or against keeping animals in zoos?
This is my outline. Plz follow this outline (you can change, if you need.) Also please DO NOT use other article. I need two quote in essay (BODY PARAG. not intro or conclusion) from ONLY THIS article but I need to change on my words as well, so if you put the quote, please change the other words. And please put the page number. EX) XXXXXXXXXXXXX(page2. XXXXXXXXX) This class is reading and writing class. I have to read this article and use ONLY THIS article. 1.Intro -Hook : Many people all over the world like going to the zoo. -Background Info of topic : Zoos look like prisons for animals. -Thesis(Claim) : People should not look animals inside of zoos. 2.Body (Relate some of the reasons for your claim. exemplify=example,fact,paraphrase) -Topic of parag : Animals should not be kept captive. -Reason and explanation : Animals in captivity -> stressful for animals -Exemplify : Animals obey their instincts. -Reason and explanation : Zoos looks like prisons for animals -Support using a paraphrase (Paraphrase from article : In the article “Animals Kept in Zoos,” Al Tyson relates that XXXXXXX Or XXXXXX (author)) : Elephant can walk anywhere up to 50km a day. 3.Body (Relate some of the reasons for your claim. exemplify=example,fact,paraphrase) -Topic of parag : People should respect animals privacy. -Reason and explanation : In front of people can give them a lot of stress. -Exemplify : Many zoos has animal shows, animal experiences. -Reason and explanation : It is cruel to train animals for our entertainment. These animals go thought special training in order to entertain people. 4. Body relate some of the reasons for contrasting beliefs (the other side of the argument or counterargument) The idea: “Some people say XXXXXXX, However, XXXXXXX” -Topic of parag : On the other side some people believe that zoos are beneficial to both animals and the public. -Reason : protect endangered species. -Reason : Can be used ->educational tool -However, : Even if they are good for experiencing animals, we cannot learn as much from stressed animals. -Support for one of your effects : OPTIONAL paraphrase : According to XXXXXXXX : “zoochosis in the animal -> similar to the human OCD. ” 5. Conclusion -Restate your thesis and summarize your essay : -Your opinion : -Call to Action (What people should do about the topic) :