i need some one to review my analytic paper and make some edits before my final submission

1 – Highlight the thesis statement, rewrite my thesis statement make it stronger with explaining what edits were made and why

2- Highlight a piece of contextual evidence, explain why is it important for your reader to know.

3- Review the summary and analysis of the first academic article, and Identify how the analysis connected to the overall thesis thesis statement. State some modification or addition that can strengthen the effectiveness of this section.

4- Review the summary and analysis of the second academic article, and Identify how the analysis connected to the overall thesis thesis statement. State some modification or addition that can strengthen the effectiveness of this section.

5- Review the summary and analysis of the third academic article, and Identify how the analysis connected to the overall thesis thesis statement. State some modification or addition that can strengthen the effectiveness of this section.

6- Review the summary and analysis of the two public sources, and Identify how the analysis connected to the overall thesis thesis statement. State some modification or addition that can strengthen the effectiveness of this section.

7- Review the summary and analysis of survey data, and Identify how the analysis connected to the overall thesis thesis statement. State some modification or addition that can strengthen the effectiveness of this section.

9- Review the conclusion for clarity and creativity, and state some modification or addition that can strenghthen the effectiveness of this section.