i need someone to review my introductory speech outline

i need someone to review my introductory speech outline.

The assignment is a introduction of a certain trait i have, “Perfectionism”. i have already completed all of the outline i just need somone to look over it for grammar errors and inconsitencies within speech. i have to do a live recording speech with this outline so i need to make sure it’s perfect. thank you 🙂

i need someone to review my introductory speech outline