i need someone to revise this paper the profs comments and the details are attached below

I need someone to revise this paper. the profs comments and the details are attached below

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“The bold knows how to win, but one must first begin”

Creating Programs in Adult Education: Assignment 2 – Foundational Knowledge Self-Assessment

Professors Comment

I’m returning your assignment for revisions. The focus of the assignment should be your own experiences in each of these areas of foundational knowledge. What experience, skills or knowledge do you already have? Where would you like to develop your skills?

Attached is the paper I had done