paper is written but need it revised

This essay is on the short story the lottery by shirley jackson and how the theme of social conformity is found in the story. I have attached a copy of the short story, as well as the essay I wrote that I need revised.

Looking for improvements in the following areas:

1. Make the paper stronger.

2. The introduction of the essay should deal more with the story’s background.

3. Make the conclusion more effective, sublimate the theme, and some of the understanding gained from the analysis of the story.