paper revision and adjustments

paper revision and adjustments.

hello please find the paper attached below and do the adjustments asked below.

there are few things that have been pointed out about it, the first email is not supposed to be an email. a letter would have been a better option because you are addressing an individual from the public and a letter would show more proficiency. moreover, in the first email as well, you assumed that person’s gender and now we live in a time where gender is a sensitive matter so you would need to change that Dear…( first and last name),…

paper revision and adjustments