peer literature review

Any comments or suggestions on this literature review. Here are some questions that may help, when reviewing the literature review.

5-7 sentences

Are the main points of the paper sufficiently developed? Does the paper bring up any interesting points that you would like to see developed further? Do you find any spots where the paper goes off on a tangent or addresses irrelevant material? Are there any spots where the author relies too heavily on generalizations?

Does the introduction make you want to keep reading? Why or why not? Is it clear what the research topic is? Why or why not?