professore comment for the rough draft
You have done more of an essay here than a white paper. You definitely have potential here if you focus your message on recommending the increased use of visual analytics.
Include an executive summary with an introduction and recommendations.
Include a table of contents.
Find graphics and information to make your white paper more visually appealing.
Use formatting to enhance the visual impact of your message.
Provide more examples of the effective use of visual analytics to persuade your audience of their value.
Imagine that your manager has asked you to develop a white paper to present to potential clients on any IT topic you have learned about in the last 12 months. Review the resources below carefully, and then do the following:
â€¢ Create an outline that organizes your ideas and supporting evidence
â€¢ Develop a rough draft that you can bring to class for feedback (at least the first full three pages should be readable).
â€¢ Revise and edit so that you have a final draft between 6-8 pages (doublespaced, not counting the cover page and references page)
â€¢ Include at least one graph, chart, or other data set that supports or illustrates your ideas (with a citation for its source)
â€¢ Pay attention to the aesthetic elements of this document, as they can be more slightly more creative than an academic journal article (see resources below for details) White Papers:
Readings and Resources
[good video on this site with templates]
Free Templates: https://templates.office.com/en-us/Papers-and-Repo…